GAWD DAMN THATS SICK
GAWD DAMN THATS SICK
maybe I overdid it. but that was just my idea
Ok so I will start off by saying it sounds nice but it feels very unfinished. The whole song kinda feels like a breakdown. I feel like you could have expanded on this a lot more. What you have isn't bad but the fact that there's no climax makes it feel unfinished and leaves it kinda unsatisfying.
Yeah, I was a bit rushed making this, but I def want to revisit it and figure out what's missing
How did I miss this song? Anyway the vibes are absolutely immaculate but it gets very kinda repetitive in the beginning since the piano repeated 3 times without much change. I like the pauses that cue in the thunder. Overall not bad and very vibey.
oh word i forgot i requested a review for this piece haha. I was actually gonna delete it cuz i dont think it has held up well, especially compared to my more recent work, but im like fuck it, might as well keep it up cuz to show improvement over time or whatever lol.
Love this!
Thank you
So for starters the whole track sounds very flat for some reason. The kick also doesn't feel like it working with anything. I like the upbeat swing type thing going on but I wish it was a lot clearer. The flat instruments kinda ruins the chaos nature of the song.
Overall it's not bad but I wish the instruments were a lot clearer.
True. along with the high frequency problem which someone mentioned... I might adjust it.
To start I kind of wish you set the scene of the track with maybe some crackling fire or perhaps some war cries or war horns. You have a lot of low frequencies come through at 1:13 that kind of messed with the emersion. You could have made an effect there of a far away horn which would've been cool. The song could've been expanded on as well with a much more intense climax.
Overall it's not bad but I really wish it expanded on some things as it has great potiential.
Gonna upload a reworked version later on this week probably!
Woah this is so sick! How have you not been discovered!? That's crazy!
Absolutely sick bro!
Thank you!
This song is underrated asf
You are a master of ambience! LIKE HOW!?
Hey! I'm SomeGuy and I mainly make orchestral pieces!
Age 19
Musician
America
Joined on 2/9/21