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This sounds sick but it has a problem and that is even though it sounds loud, it feels kinda empty. I also think you could improve the composition as well and the ending could have been worked on a bit more. Try to add instruments and sounds to it and then make some volume tweaks. The drop is also kinda underwhelming. It's certainly not bad due to how dynamic it is but there are some things that could be approved in my opinion.

IaNOOB2ANDSOUP responds:

ok thanks!

I think the song lacks dynamism. I think of it were dynamic it could really be something interesting. The bass sound - I don't know if it is a bass but it sounds like one - at 1:57 kinda sounds out of place as well. It has a good feeling to it. I just think it could have been more interesting.

Foxmaxter responds:

Thanks for commenting, I will take these details into account to improve in the future

This gives off such a nice vibe! I think you could have made it just a little bit more dynamic and worked on easing into song but other than that I really like. Good job!

GrahamFr responds:

Thankyou, this is helpful

Woah this is sick! Very well done!

Vubobinali responds:

good thing I check newgrounds super often to see that people are actually paying attention to my crap

Not bad for a first song but it needs a more defined ending. There was no major energy switch and some of the notes don't really go well together. Also I kinda wish there was a drop.

Overall there's is a lot to improve on but we all start somewhere. So don't give up! Keep practicing and you can get better!

ArchieDM responds:

Thanks man!

It's definitely not bad. Especially for 3 hours. It's simple but effective but I think the quality of the sounds could've been improved a bit. Nice job!

YoriYakuza responds:

Thank you! I do agree that the quality is not the best, but some of that was intentional. But not all of it :D

The song starts off with giving a nice feeling but I really feel like this could've been much more. There was little to no energy change and I think it would benefited from sounding more dynamic. I think at the start you should make the piano sound far away with a feedback killer and increasing the room size on the sound. I don't know if they call it feedback killer on FL because I use bandlabs. There are other ways to make something sound far away but that's the way I know. There could be a better option so I think you should search that up for tips.

Overall I think this song has a lot of potiential and I wanted to see more come from it.

I really think you should have gone with something with more energy and more dynamic. The composition of the drop doesn't feel right and the sounds are kinda grainy. Also the drop comes in really really late. That's a long time to try and keep someone's attention so it's going to be really hard to get someone to listen up until that part. Also try to experiment with SF effects to produce more quality sounds.

I think you should make the drop come sooner. Try to work on making a more defined ending. Try out dynamic layering as well.

Hey! I'm SomeGuy and I mainly make orchestral pieces!

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