Before I say anything I personally think you shouldn't ask for a scout and you should let your music speak for itself.
Now for the song it feels very empty. There really isn't much going on with it. You could have started off subtle and transitioned into something dynamic. It feels repetitive as well. I think a good inspiration of what you could've done is KIDS by TOMBOYY. It was the song from Broken Signal by Grax in GD.
Overall there could have been a lot more going on for it to sound more interesting.