It's very short and there's not much to it. It seems kind of repetitive and it doesn't benefit that much from the quiet parts imo.
Composition is kind of mediocre and I think you could've made it more dynamic to make it more interesting.
Overall I think there are some things that could be improved.
Holy crap I love this! You set the mood really well in the beginning. The build up to the drop was absolutely amazing. It feels so we'll put together. I think the eery sound at 2:07 is coming through a bit too much and it kind of makes a bit of a low screeching sound. It's not that bad to the point where it hurts my ears though. It's pretty minor. The build up at 2:25 felt like it was lacking something. I think if that eery sound was a more atmospheric it could give more feeling to it and make it sound really good. Again it's not bad I just feel it could be a bit better. But then it moves on to this cool drop at 2:45 that's really cool. It was a good transition to a nice burst of energy that gives a nice surreal feeling. I think you ending the song beautifully.
Overall this is amazing and it definitely deserves more attention! Good job!
Sorry it's been like 21 hours and I didn't get to it but I'm here now! Ok so I don't find that there is much going on. Composition wise it feels kinda meh. I think you could've made this sound a bit more ominous with a reverb on a couple of things. I don't excatly know how a reverb works on the software you used but on the one I use (bandlabs) there is this thing called room size. Room size is a part of a the reverb names space maker (again this might be different on your software.)Increasing that can make it more ominous. Also a feedback killer would be nice as well. In my experience a feedback killer can make something sound like it's far away without but it doesn't have the same effect as turning the sound down. While it does turn the sound down, it makes the sound softer. I also don't know if it's called a feedback killer on your software. The thing at 0:02 that fades out is nice but it sounds kind of bland. You can try the reverb on that. 2:55 nice transition. I was about to say making more dynamic but I think it just needs to be more atmospheric instead. I think that would "bring it to life" if you know what I mean.
Overall I think it's a bit bland at the moment but not bad. It has a nice rhythm to it that I dig. Maybe video game. Like an underground area. Also what software do you use? 🤔
Yea m8 i get what you mean, and you were probably talking about the cymbal at 0:02
btw im using fl studio and there is like 5 different ones and the one i use is Fruity Convolver
Woah this is a very beautiful piano solo! I don't think there is anything wrong with it. It's a very well put together piece! It gives off a really good feeling that I can't describe but it's nice! Good job!
Thanks a lot for your review! I'm glad you liked the song :D
Although it does sound like a video game song it's really repetitive with not much to make up for it. That's the major downfall of the song. The composition just doesn't feel right either. I recommend trying out a song structure and try to add some contrast between parts of the song. Parts like 0:26 to 0:28 are also kind of random as well and don't seem like they fit.
Overall I think there should be more added to the song and you should overall try to make it more dynamic.
I kinda just made the song for fun, posted it to NG and didn't really think about it, Thanks for the constructive criticism though!
This so damn sick! I think the beginning sets the mood of the song perfectly! The build up to 0:59 is really good and the transition at 1:44 is really smooth. And holy crap the drop at 1:52 is just outstanding not to mention the perfect transition into it. The energy paired with the really good composition makes this super good. I like how dynamic it got from 3:22 to 4:06. The way the song wraps up as well is just really good as well.
Overall I think this song is really good and deserves a lot more attention! Very well done!
The song feels like it's missing a lot of things. The beginning gets really repetitive and 1:50 - 2:07 is where things fall off because nothing really happens here. I think this song would really benefit from a sub bass and having more than one sound play the lead. It ends really abruptly as well. It's composition also isn't the best unfortunately.
Overall I think the main thing it needs is a lot more sounds and not random ones. Try a sub bass and try to use get an idea of a song structure from people like Teminte like intro, build up, pre drop, drop, etc.
It's a very nice song that gives off a terraria vibe. It's nice and dynamic. The composition is pretty good as well and the song just feels like an adventure. I think you made a really good video game song although it is a bit short. I wish it was longer.
Overall really good! Keep up the good work!
Thank you. I also think it's kind of short, I might make an extended version in the future. ;)
The biggest issue it that everything after 0:59 feels like filler to the song. A lot of the song feels like a build up to something that never. The composition is ok but it's not that dynamic and I think you could have executed that atmosphere of the song a bit better.
Overall it needs more to it.
I honestly have no idea how that happened
This is a really neat song that passes off a really good vibe. I think it executes a very chill mood very well. I do think you could have eased into the song a bit better.
Overall it's really good so good job! Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the kind words!!
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