SomeGuyMusic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[shoe strings]

The song ends rather abruptly and the overall song fills pretty flat. It doesn't really pass much feeling (in my opinion.) It's simple with not much to make up for it. I recommend making it more dynamic and/or adding more energy to it. That way it can feel more memorable. The composition also feels pretty off mainly when the song starts off due to the beginning feeling kind of rushed. You could try a synth or a sub bass as a background noise in the beginning to assist the feeling aspect.

I feel every song has potential so I think this can be something great like a memorable song from a game. I think you should drive inspiration from those old school games that have those nostalgic soundtracks to them. Like some old Legend of Zelda songs or some old school Mario games.

Overall I feel it needs some work done to it but keep going! Also I think it's creative to use the chords on terraria.

[Free Flow]

This is more synthwave. The ending got really repetitive. It gives off a nice feeling though. Perhaps it could've been just a tad bit more dynamic. Other than that I really like. Good job!

Saucerpan responds:

thanks for the feedback yo

[Color Land]

I think you should try a more defined ending but other than that this is cool! Good job!

[1st]

This could sound so cool but what's holding it back is the composition. The beat doesn't sound consistent and that kinda throws things off. They also sound very flat so try making a more powerful beat with a clap and a snare layered. You can that at first and then for the final build up add in a bass drum to make it more powerful.

[Ocean Breeze]

This gives off such nice vibes but I hate to say this but it didn't finish fading out. It got close but then it just cut out. It's minor but it's at the end so that's the last thing I hear in the song. I was going to take off like half a star for it but it's very minor so I changed my score. Other than that it's really good! Good job!

SwipeScore responds:

Thanks so much!! I'll work on making fade-outs sound more natural.

[Kingating - Zalbe]

I think the beginning dragged out for just a bit too long. The ending also doesn't really feel defined. Besides those two things I think the song is really good. I like how dynamic it is! Good job!

[Melophobia]

Well I think I need to get a big issue out the way first and that's how it ends. It ends way too abruptly. Now on to some issues that aren't so bad. I feel like there's something missing from the song. Composition wise it sounds ok. Maybe the composition could be just a bit better. It feels more like a video game rather than chipstep.

Overall it's not bad but the ending really takes away points for me.

Eranity responds:

Thanks for the review, I honestly didn't mean to have all those dead seconds at the end of the audio.

Also, I wasn't sure what to tag it so I chose "Chipstep" because I thought it was for Chiptune Songs lol

[M421 - Week]

The instruments aren't really working together so the composition doesn't really seem right. I also think this could have been more dynamic as well. It's simple with not much to make up for it. I recommend starting off with the violin to set the mood a bit and putting some reverb on and after that you could use that techno pad noise (idk what sound it is) with a feedback killer and maybe some reverb to go with the violin to start off with. The main problem is that in the beginning the timing the violin comes in is not optimal. The ending isn't defined because it ends way to suddenly.

Overall I do see potiential in it. I'm not going to sugar coat it. I'm just going to say it needs a lot of work. Don't let that discourage you. Keep trying because we all start somewhere.