The instruments aren't really working together so the composition doesn't really seem right. I also think this could have been more dynamic as well. It's simple with not much to make up for it. I recommend starting off with the violin to set the mood a bit and putting some reverb on and after that you could use that techno pad noise (idk what sound it is) with a feedback killer and maybe some reverb to go with the violin to start off with. The main problem is that in the beginning the timing the violin comes in is not optimal. The ending isn't defined because it ends way to suddenly.
Overall I do see potiential in it. I'm not going to sugar coat it. I'm just going to say it needs a lot of work. Don't let that discourage you. Keep trying because we all start somewhere.