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This could sound so cool but what's holding it back is the composition. The beat doesn't sound consistent and that kinda throws things off. They also sound very flat so try making a more powerful beat with a clap and a snare layered. You can that at first and then for the final build up add in a bass drum to make it more powerful.

This gives off such nice vibes but I hate to say this but it didn't finish fading out. It got close but then it just cut out. It's minor but it's at the end so that's the last thing I hear in the song. I was going to take off like half a star for it but it's very minor so I changed my score. Other than that it's really good! Good job!

SwipeScore responds:

Thanks so much!! I'll work on making fade-outs sound more natural.

I think the beginning dragged out for just a bit too long. The ending also doesn't really feel defined. Besides those two things I think the song is really good. I like how dynamic it is! Good job!

Well I think I need to get a big issue out the way first and that's how it ends. It ends way too abruptly. Now on to some issues that aren't so bad. I feel like there's something missing from the song. Composition wise it sounds ok. Maybe the composition could be just a bit better. It feels more like a video game rather than chipstep.

Overall it's not bad but the ending really takes away points for me.

Eranity responds:

Thanks for the review, I honestly didn't mean to have all those dead seconds at the end of the audio.

Also, I wasn't sure what to tag it so I chose "Chipstep" because I thought it was for Chiptune Songs lol

The instruments aren't really working together so the composition doesn't really seem right. I also think this could have been more dynamic as well. It's simple with not much to make up for it. I recommend starting off with the violin to set the mood a bit and putting some reverb on and after that you could use that techno pad noise (idk what sound it is) with a feedback killer and maybe some reverb to go with the violin to start off with. The main problem is that in the beginning the timing the violin comes in is not optimal. The ending isn't defined because it ends way to suddenly.

Overall I do see potiential in it. I'm not going to sugar coat it. I'm just going to say it needs a lot of work. Don't let that discourage you. Keep trying because we all start somewhere.

I would consider this videogame rather than classical. This is really simple which isn't bad. I find that a lot of videogame songs on newgrounds tend to be simple so this is pretty good. Nice simple. Something a player could vibe to. I think the ending could have been smoother or have that synth pad (Idk what it is. It sounds electric. Sounds like a synth.) a bit lower.

This sounds pretty cool and it gives off some old school game vibes so of this were for a video game soundtrack you hit it out the park. It also sounds dynamic while giving off this nostalgic boss or stage type vibe. The only thing I have to say is work on making the ending just a bit more smoother. It ends kinda abruptly. Well done!

The drums sound glitchy. Try lowering them. It doesn't fit the vibe of the guitar which throws off the composition. I recommend having your drums as a background sound with the guitar being the main one. I also recommend working on the ending as well. I think it should exit a lot smoother. Overall not bad. I'm digging the guitar but there are some things that could be improved

monsterteeth responds:

ty for the feedback!

Hey! I'm SomeGuy and I mainly make orchestral pieces!

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