For me this doesn't really give a hallway vibe. When you think about a hallway you may think long or eery. It doesn't have to be long and eery but something that matches a hallway vibe. I think if this is called hallway I think you should've tried something more ambient. You made it glitchy but I think a hallways vibe should flow. Try to take Castlevania Symphony of the Night for inspiration. It's my favorite game not just for it's secrets but the vibe it's music passes off. In combination with the design of the game it feels perfect.
Overall the title didn't work well with the song in my opinion. Sometimes the glitchy sound plays by itself which makes the song lose energy at times. Keep working hard! Practice makes perfect. No one is going to start off as a top tier music marker.