SomeGuyMusic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Good Luck to You]

The song starts off with giving a nice feeling but I really feel like this could've been much more. There was little to no energy change and I think it would benefited from sounding more dynamic. I think at the start you should make the piano sound far away with a feedback killer and increasing the room size on the sound. I don't know if they call it feedback killer on FL because I use bandlabs. There are other ways to make something sound far away but that's the way I know. There could be a better option so I think you should search that up for tips.

Overall I think this song has a lot of potiential and I wanted to see more come from it.

[River Flows In You (Remix)]

I really think you should have gone with something with more energy and more dynamic. The composition of the drop doesn't feel right and the sounds are kinda grainy. Also the drop comes in really really late. That's a long time to try and keep someone's attention so it's going to be really hard to get someone to listen up until that part. Also try to experiment with SF effects to produce more quality sounds.

I think you should make the drop come sooner. Try to work on making a more defined ending. Try out dynamic layering as well.

[GD level: Slipper]

To use songs in GD you first have to get scouted and then you have to get whitelisted by Robtop or an elder moderator. Thing is you have to earn a scout. Another artist has to scout you but first you have to make something that will get you noticed by other artist. Mods on newgrounds recommend not asking for scouts and letting your music speak for itself and I agree with that.

[don't worry, it will end soon]

The vibes are super nice. Music I could relax to all day. Perfect for if it's raining but if it's not raining it's still relaxing. Good job!

[Partialism - Regent Centre]

This song sounds like it belongs in a video game not going to lie. I really like the melody and the song feels very well put together. At the end I think you could have faded out better. It kinda stays at the same volume then ends instead of slowly decreasing in volume. Other than that Good job!

Tetriform responds:

thanks for the review!
yeah, admittedly it might have been better to have it fade out completely
the issue is that you can't actually set the triangle channel to fade out on the nes, it's either on or off
i guess i will have to keep that in mind for the future :)

- jack

[Horny]

Interesting song title. But damn I'm getting some Infekt vibes from this. Specifically das riddim so I definitely think you accomplished what you were going for. It hits hard and that really helps grasp attention and it made me want to keep listening to it. It's sounds very dynamic as well. I like how you switched up the first and second drop. Just when I think it's about to get too repetitive something else comes in so big props for that! And nice job on the transitions! Absolute fire 🔥! Well done!

OkuuMusic responds:

Thank you :)

[A Romantic Evening]

This gives off a super nice vibe and I think the title fits nicely. I like how dynamic it is and this is something I could relax to to be honest. I will say that it ends really abruptly so I think you should work on a more defined ending. Other than that this is really good! Well done!

[Solar Silence]

Unfortunately the whole song kinda feels like a build up that doesn't really go anywhere. It also feels like you only used one synth lead for the entire song. I recommend adding more to the song and trying something like a spacey dubstep or techno type feeling.