So one thing I noticed is that you may hear the voice at 2:04 better with headphones (idk because I'm reviewing this at work and I don't have my headphones in) but it's not that present in the mix without headphones. In my opinion, it's important to keep the mix in mind for headphones and without headphones. I would just turn it up a bit more or try to balance out the mix a bit more. It's hard to pinpoint the issues without headphones but overall it sounds pretty good. Kind of reminds me of a Devil May Cry 3 track.