The song falls short composition wise imo. The drop has no sort of progression to it. I recommend a chord progression to go to it or maybe have it change more often. At 0:52 the note changes but to not much of an effect. The mixdown is a bit questionable. It sounds a bit cluttered. Maybe some stage gaining and panning would help. The snare choice doesn't seem fitting. I think Sharks is a good example for inspiration because this sounds like his style. I feel like the main issue was the approach to it tbh. I think the beginning piano could be a bit softer and quieter and then gradually get louder to add to the build up. It also gets a bit repetitive despite the short time it's played. Sound design sounds pretty nice though.