The song sounds nice compositionally but the mix sounds very muddy.
The song sounds nice compositionally but the mix sounds very muddy.
Damn that second drop is absolutely sick asf. I kind of wish the drop at 1:08 just a bit more energy to it but I respect the decision because it's a good contrast to the previous part. I like the atmosphere of this song and that synth at 1:27 is sick. Also one more thing I would like to add. The second drop was quite short.
Had to come back say this. Colour Bass > Future Bass.
I'm a sucker for 2/4. I really enjoy the atmospheric feel of this track. My only advice would be to make the sidechain a little less intense and to also perhaps add some reverb to this voice at 2:43 or maybe even better, have it fade into a reverb. Overall very well done!
The only thing I will recommend is a countermelody at 1:21 but I really enjoyed this! Highly underrated song! The fade out of the rain in the beginning to the song was very nice and I like how it ended how it started although the ending feels a bit long.
Gotta agree on that yeah, that melody might go on for a bit too long, and the ambie ce at the end might be too long as well if its in a playlist or something sorrzz, also thx for the feedback :D... Though sorry its probably not underrated anymore since frontpage heheh
Very well done! The mix sounds pretty nice.
Thank you!
I really enjoy the harmonic elements of this song. I feel it falls flat a bit on the atmosphere though. Still quite nice.
I kind of wish it had more harmonic elements but I guess that's just the style of the song. Nice work
Groovy
I feel as if this could have been expanded upon much greater. My main issue is that the piano sounds very bare and it doesn't really have many interesting qualities going for it. I would recommend messing the velocity a bit more. I would actually like to make a version of this as well as I actually kind of enjoy the arrangement.
Yes, I agree with you, that’s exactly what I’m doing, it just takes a little time, this project has been lying on my computer for half a year, and only recently I remembered about it
remember this is just a demo
Sick stuff!
Hey! I'm SomeGuy and I mainly make orchestral pieces!
Age 19
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America
Joined on 2/9/21