WOAH THIS IS REALLY GOOD! I have like no complaints what so ever. You nailed the feeling of an adventure on this song! Feels like it come out of a movie or something! Absolutely extraordinary!
WOAH THIS IS REALLY GOOD! I have like no complaints what so ever. You nailed the feeling of an adventure on this song! Feels like it come out of a movie or something! Absolutely extraordinary!
Very glad you enjoyed it! :)))
I would like to start off by saying I think the piano in the beginning should be a bit quieter and have more reverb to maybe add more feeling to the song. At 1:47 it feels like what sounds like a supersaw (I don't really know) is drowning out everything. Although it's a lead I think the other instruments in that part could come through a bit more. I feel like you could have mixed some parts better like 1:47 or made them louder such as 4:46. I think this part could be louder.
A thing that I really like though is the feeling the song passes off. I also like how you switched up 4:03 so 4:03 and 1:47 aren't just the same. That being said it still does suffer the same problem as 1:47 being the mix. Since the lead is drowning out a lot of things, it makes the part sound less full.
Overall it's not bad at all and I actually really enjoyed! Good job!
I see what you are saying about the 1:47 and 4:46 parts. The things being drowned out are meant to fill in the spaces where the lead supersaw isn't playing. I do agree that maybe the supersaw could definitely be quieter, but I think I'm fine with it that way. I'm really bad at mixing and mostly play it by ear. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for leaving a review!
Woah this is really good. My only complaint is that the dynamics stayed relatively the same. Besides that it's really good!
Thanks, friend. ππ½οΈ
It's really repetitive and doesn't really seem like there is much to it. You could try adding more instruments to it and to try and get the "cavey" sound you could mess with the reverb on some instruments. I trumpet could sound cool. I think for a mine you should go for something my ambient (in my opinion.)
Thanks for your comment. The xylophone is the pickaxe, while the chip noise is the bomb.
I really like it but I feel like it could be a bit more chill. What I mean by that is that it feels a bit too intense, but besides that it's really nice.
thanks for your feedback!
You have the one of the coolest styles I have ever seen. Something about your music feels so surreal.
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thank you very much
This is pretty nice but I can't help but feel that a few spots feel a bit empty. Other than that I think it's really nice! Good job!
Thanks for your criticism
Sick bro! π₯
Thank you so much!
You aren't a newbie. I've been trolled. This is really nice and calming. I think the intensity of the wubs should be calmed down just a bit. I like the atmosphere the voice creates and the melody of the piano is really nice. The drum pattern ties it together nicely to make a cool game song. Nicely done!
Hah thanks for checking it out... and fast! I meant the track is a newbie heh
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