Well I think I need to get a big issue out the way first and that's how it ends. It ends way too abruptly. Now on to some issues that aren't so bad. I feel like there's something missing from the song. Composition wise it sounds ok. Maybe the composition could be just a bit better. It feels more like a video game rather than chipstep.
Overall it's not bad but the ending really takes away points for me.
Thanks for the review, I honestly didn't mean to have all those dead seconds at the end of the audio.
Also, I wasn't sure what to tag it so I chose "Chipstep" because I thought it was for Chiptune Songs lol
The drums sound glitchy. Try lowering them. It doesn't fit the vibe of the guitar which throws off the composition. I recommend having your drums as a background sound with the guitar being the main one. I also recommend working on the ending as well. I think it should exit a lot smoother. Overall not bad. I'm digging the guitar but there are some things that could be improved
ty for the feedback!
This sounds sick but it has a problem and that is even though it sounds loud, it feels kinda empty. I also think you could improve the composition as well and the ending could have been worked on a bit more. Try to add instruments and sounds to it and then make some volume tweaks. The drop is also kinda underwhelming. It's certainly not bad due to how dynamic it is but there are some things that could be approved in my opinion.
ok thanks!
I think the song lacks dynamism. I think of it were dynamic it could really be something interesting. The bass sound - I don't know if it is a bass but it sounds like one - at 1:57 kinda sounds out of place as well. It has a good feeling to it. I just think it could have been more interesting.
Thanks for commenting, I will take these details into account to improve in the future
This gives off such a nice vibe! I think you could have made it just a little bit more dynamic and worked on easing into song but other than that I really like. Good job!
Thankyou, this is helpful
Woah this is sick! Very well done!
good thing I check newgrounds super often to see that people are actually paying attention to my crap
Not bad for a first song but it needs a more defined ending. There was no major energy switch and some of the notes don't really go well together. Also I kinda wish there was a drop.
Overall there's is a lot to improve on but we all start somewhere. So don't give up! Keep practicing and you can get better!
Thanks man!
It's definitely not bad. Especially for 3 hours. It's simple but effective but I think the quality of the sounds could've been improved a bit. Nice job!
Thank you! I do agree that the quality is not the best, but some of that was intentional. But not all of it :D
This song sounds like it belongs in a video game not going to lie. I really like the melody and the song feels very well put together. At the end I think you could have faded out better. It kinda stays at the same volume then ends instead of slowly decreasing in volume. Other than that Good job!
thanks for the review!
yeah, admittedly it might have been better to have it fade out completely
the issue is that you can't actually set the triangle channel to fade out on the nes, it's either on or off
i guess i will have to keep that in mind for the future :)
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